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One day, Mark and Jolene were hungry. Because neither of them had a lot of money, they decided to make sandwiches at Mark’s house and go on a winter picnic. “It will be fun,” Jolene said.
Jolene came over and brought bread, mayonnaise, and lettuce. Mark had Oscar Mayer bologna, Kraft cheese, and three types of mustard. It was already two o’clock, so they hurried because they wanted lots of daylight. They made sandwiches, and Jolene made iced tea. They couldn’t buy soda, but iced tea tasted just fine.
When they got to Washington Park, they spread out a blanket and had a picnic. Mark liked Dijon mustard the best, but Jolene liked French’s Yellow Mustard because it was classic. They had iced tea and watched the sunset. Even though it wasn’t expensive, it was a good Saturday.
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one day mark and jolene were hungry. because neither of them had. a lot of money they decided to make sandwiches at marks house and go on a winter picnic it will be fun jolene said jolene came over and brought bread mayonnaise and lettuce mark had oscar mayer bologna kraft cheese and 3 types of mustard. it was already two oclock so they hurried, because they wanted lots of daylight. they finished making sandwiches and jolene made some iced tea. they couldnt buy soda, but, iced, tea tasted, just fine. when they got to the washington park they spread out a blanket and had a picnic. mark liked dijon mustard the best but jolene liked frenchs yellow mustard because it was classic. they ate had iced tea and watched the sunset. even though it wasnt expensive it was a good saturday.
